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Bir kez ben de görmüştüm,
ağaç dallarında
kristal büyüsünü
dünya kaybolmuştu etrafımdan
yanında olduklarım
yanımda bulunanlar
bir ben kalmıştım
bir de doğanın eşsiz büyüsü
yol boyu uzanmıştık
iki yanımda kristal düğünü
kar desem değil
buz olmadığı belli
bir yağlı boya tablo sanki
dallara yürüyen özsuyuydu
belki soğuğu görünce donan

Çok kez ben de hissetmiştim
cansuyumun donduğunu
parmaklarıma dek
kılcallarım boyunca
dondurucu soğuklarda
ama mecazi anlamda
işte o zaman
kırılgan oluyor insan
kristal kadar bile direngen değil
sırça köşkün kendinsin
emek emek yürütmüşsün
özsuyunu ta en uca
yaşamı sarmışsın
boylu boyuna
bir soğuk ve donmuşsun
erimek bir sonraki
bahara...

xxxx

Once I saw, too,
Crystal magic in tree..
Then all disappeared
The ones I accompany,
The ones belong to me.
Only the magic in tree
And stunned, fascinated me
Crystal wedding at road side
Not a snowy scene
Nor a icy skin
As if oil colored painting.

Knew it was the sap
Begun to rise
Since it was so cold
Turned to ice

I've befallen such a case for years
Lost my life water, even tears.
A freezing cold,
But in metaphorical sense,
Stollen my unique bounce
Replaced it with hollowness.
Behold in that case,
One becomes brittle,
Not durable even as crystal.
Like a glass pavilion, vulnerable.

Knew it was unloving
Freezed my soul.
Thwaing should wait
Until next glow.
©2009 ~goldenlight
:icongoldenlight:

Author's Comments

Hani kışın ağaçlar kristalleşir ya.. Bir fotoğrafını görmüşüm ve bu şiiri yazmışım. Fotoğrafı Gökhan yollamış, şiiri de o saklamış.. İyi ki de saklamış. Ne güzel yazmışım...

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:iconcavaliere:
Çok anlamlı ve güzel bir şiir. :) :rose:
:iconaqua-rat:
I'd love to know what this says - my husband is a crystallographer.

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:icongoldenlight:
çok teşekkür ederim.. ben de sevdim. Böyle yazı;p da bıraktığım çok şiir yoktur umarım, kaybetmediğine seviniyorum.

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:icongoldenlight:
I was planning to translate it as usual, now I have one more reason to do that.. keep waiting..

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:icongoldenlight:
My dear, thank you for enforcing me to translate that piece.. I love it..

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:iconjuditangelo:
really magical! :D where do you find inspiration for such an awesome words?

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Even when tomorrow arrives and everything disappears, if you continue at my side smiling, I won't need nothing else.
:icongoldenlight:
the beautity is in the way you see, honey.. You are always too good to me...

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:iconaqua-rat:
Hurray!

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
:iconaqua-rat:
A lovely subject to use as the basis for the poem. We actually had ice on all the trees last week and it was so sparkly and beautiful. Although you say in yours that it is really the sap. I also like very much how you have part of the poem be about the visual image and then later on it becomes a metaphor for unhappiness.
Thank you for going to all the trouble to translate it!

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)

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